George Marsh
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RE: Weekend GuestsAt a sound at the door she scoops herself back into her dress.

I'm in a rush, Stuart - sorry. I'll respond to all these tomorrow. But my first question is: what is the narrator point of view? It seems that someone...

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RE: another walking haiku and a haibun - New Day

Absolutely gorgeous, Jane. You are flowering again.

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RE: A few new haiku

We are getting very good stuff on this forum suddenly! These are true haiku, Karen, and very strong. I love the first four to bits, and the pine tree ...

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RE: new haiku

Wonderful, Jane! You have hit a hot streak. These are the best you have done for a long time, with a beautiful sense of cycladic rhythms and time and ...

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RE: A couple of new haiku

This is a test posting to see if you are receiving email notifications of new topics. Please confirm that you do (and feel free to comment on the haik...

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RE: Our First Time

I like the subject - I'm a pushover for this, it rings my bell and I have a Pavlovian excitement. The double entwining of the haiku is charming and sc...

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RE: All Hallow's Eve

I'm still asking myself detective-story questions. The Mercedes is clearly not the narrator's ride, so what is? Something equally sinister. Which char...

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RE: Belfast Sink

I've been away on sesshin (Jane Spray was there too!) and this was the perfect haibun to return to. It catches the reverent, quiet , vividly ordinary ...

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RE: Wish You Were Here

I love these wistful, atmospheric, porcupine distance relationships you do, in down-at-heel places. Is this how humans are? It certainly captures rela...

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RE: For Ken

As a small boat sailor I can't overcome my scepticism, much as I would like to. But I offer a new haiku, a combination of observation in the New Fores...

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RE: Chasing Lines in a Window

Dear Jonathan The viewpoint from bed, or rather listening point from bed, on the storm is lovely and the storm is vivid. I like the hunkered city. I d...

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RE: A few tanka. Comments welcome.

Dear Stuart, I don't feel competent to comment on tanka. I've never taken any interest in them or seen the point of them, and so never studied them an...

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