Sorry .. dont seem to have a critiqual bone in my body today. Just very much enjoyed reading this. I got it ... was there. Thanks
Stunning, particularly the last red berry in the bush.
Reminded me of City of New Orleans (sung by Arlo Guthrie) in the description of the 'edgeland'. Love the haiku and its counterpoint with the prose. An...
Sensuous, bitter sweet and melancholic. Lovely
Whoops ... Just seen that I took out the *** as well :)
Thanks George ... funnily enough I had a load more and then I went through them and weeded a bit and thought to do the seasons which gave a sort of or...
Well I just tried putting in a haibun. It's actually one from 2002 when Ken and Michael McClintock were offering me advice. I wanted to see how easy i...
Loved this haibun but I have a problem with 'chattering' and 'talking' if they were in fact 'signing'. Could you get round this with something like 'a...
I think the choice of either sunset spreads or liquid sunset is correct because liquid and spread seem to fight it each other image-wise. By the way t...