Weekend GuestsAt a sound at the door she scoops herself back into her dress.  


Stuart Quine
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03/09/2018 6:09 pm  

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Softly lit nursery. Under a mobile of moons and stars a baby mewling in his cot. She opens her red plka dot dress and releases a breast from her nursing bra. Feint blue veins and a coral-pink areola and nipple, heavy with milk.  

George Marsh
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04/09/2018 9:30 am  

I'm in a rush, Stuart - sorry. I'll respond to all these tomorrow. But my first question is: what is the narrator point of view? It seems that someone is watching her - with what sort of interest?


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