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04/02/2018 1:19 pm
a robin
warming
a frosted gate
walking
a different path
on yesterday's footprints
in the kitchen
light on the curve
of a teaspoon
this broken gate
unbothered
by functionality
in conversation
I miss
the long pause
autumn morning
I scrape
my frosted window
each morning
the pine tree
facing the wind
passing a field
of scattered turnips
laughing
floating
against the oak
this winter sun
Please feel free to comment. Best wishes. Karen
08/02/2018 10:20 am
We are getting very good stuff on this forum suddenly! These are true haiku, Karen, and very strong. I love the first four to bits, and the pine tree facing the wind with patient endurance. I also like the idea of laughing turnips (!).
09/02/2018 7:15 pm
Nice Karen. I particularly love the last three - really lovely, and they all seem to have in common a curious sort of personification of the objects seen. Really effective!
